Talk:Quiero Bailar (song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 02:55, 8 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Background

"United States Recording Industry Association of America" 'United States' is redundant here.

Done

Composition

"by Ivy Queen herself" no need of "herself"

Done

The rest of the paragraph is unreferenced.

Done

What is "Luquid riddim"?

The "Luquid riddim" is a riddim. Such as "Dem Bow". I tried searching to see if there was an article I could link to but apparently not.

"In the song she berates" A comma is missing after "song"

Done

"to bed to him" to him? or with him?

Done

Release and chart performance

You don't need to mention all the follow-up singles, I guess.

Is this better?

"2005 becoming" Comma after 2005
"of the week and peaked" Comma before "and"
"Billboard Latin Rhythm Songs chart" On the Billboard.... Try to merge the next sentence with this one, or rewordit to avoid the use of "On the" at the start.

How would you suggest? Those are two different charts so they have different sentences.

"I've worked very hard in my career, but I get surprised because I've never expected to get to these places." Who said this? Add it.

It says "Ivy Queen said." directly after that sentence.

Critical reception

"and as being" --> "as well as being"

Done

"stated "Quiero Bailar" shows" stated that

Done

Okay. Everything else seems good but the lead. Try to check at other song articles to see which is the best way to write the lead and mimick that style. Its current state is a bit weird. — ΛΧΣ²¹ 03:04, 9 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Let me take a look. — DivaKnockouts (talk) 03:28, 9 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done — DivaKnockouts (talk) 03:50, 9 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Passed — ΛΧΣ²¹ 04:24, 9 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]