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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 16:39, 18 July 2023 (UTC)
- Many thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:32, 18 July 2023 (UTC)
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- Lots of duplinks found using the usual tool.
- Removed.
- "into a quest" should be "on a quest"
- Done.
- "Half-elf" Elf should be capitalized?
- Done.
- 'Frodo "goes with the pain of a sad but noble decision"' doesn't parallel the structure of the earlier clause ("Bilbo's... venal motives"). It would sound better if it did.
- Fixed.
- The images are all licensed and used correctly.
- Noted.
- Just as a compliment, the article is very nicely illustrated; the medieval illustrations are used particularly well for the more abstract points.
- Thank you!
- The sources are all reliable and formatted correctly.
- Spotchecks:
- Birns, Nicholas (2012). "'You Have Grown Very Much': The Scouring of the Shire and the Novelistic Aspects of The Lord of the Rings". Journal of the Fantastic in the Arts. Verifies all claims made.
- Hirsch, Bernhard (2014). "After the "end of all things": The Long Return Home to the Shire". Tolkien Studies. Verifies all claims made.
- Moore, Clare (2022). "Goddess and Mortal: The Celtic and the French Morgan le Fay in Tolkien's Silmarillion". Mythlore. Verifies all claims made.
- Overall a great article that has just a couple minor prose issues. AryKun (talk) 14:45, 25 July 2023 (UTC)
- Many thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:03, 25 July 2023 (UTC)
- Okay, will be passing the article. AryKun (talk) 15:10, 25 July 2023 (UTC)
- Many thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:03, 25 July 2023 (UTC)