Talk:Questprobe featuring The Hulk/GA1
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:09, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- "games intended to consist of twelve installments, but only released..." this parses badly for me and I think the sentence is trying to do too much in one. Maybe: "It is the first installment in Questprobe, a series of graphic adventure games. It was intended to consist of twelve installments, but only three were released before the developer's bankruptcy."?
- "superhero Hulk and" could/should link Hulk!
- "Marvel had granted Adventure International a ten-year license for exclusive use of Marvel's characters in adventure games. This was Marvel's" Marvel used thrice very quickly.
- "Romita Sr..[9] " spare full stop.
- "1984 for" comma after 1984.
- "Reception to" normally reception of, or Reaction to...
- Ref 19 needs a pp.
That's all, good stuff. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 12:19, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man:Made the respective changes on behalf of Cat's Tuxedo. Roberth Martinez (talk) 16:01, 17 September 2021 (UTC)