Talk:Quency Williams

Quency Williams has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: October 24, 2023. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 09:23, 22 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Notes

added cfl linebackers and def linemen cats, rem american linebackers (unless you had a reason for it being there)
Added past teams note and astericks to infobox
"University, and saw" remove comma
- Done.
"He played in every year at the school," that makes it sound like he played ar auburn for 100 years
- Hah...changed to "in every year of his at the school" - is that better?
any college stats
- Not much...one interception. Not sure if you want me to add that in.
The raiders section needs revised. PFA says he signed in 1984 infobox will need revised too
- Changed.
  - i think the raiders is still incorrect. According to PFA, he was placed on IR in 84 and released in 85. This LA Times source has him on the team in Aug 85. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 03:33, 24 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
    - @WikiOriginal-9: How about now? BeanieFan11 (talk) 14:14, 24 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
      - I made a minor copyedit. Also, can you cite the PFA transactions page to that claim.
        @WikiOriginal-9: Done. BeanieFan11 (talk) 14:25, 24 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
"In 1986, Williams was contacted " source says 3 months after departure could have been 85 technically
- Changed to "Williams was later contacted"
it should say he was released by the lions without playing in a game.
- Added.
cfl career totals
- Added.
"on September 8" this is kind of pedantic but how do we know the source wasn't reporting yesterday's transactions
- You're right - that appears to have been Sep. 7's transactions - changed.
"professional truck driver" sounds like a sport. Suggest just putting tow truck operator like the article said.
- Haha...changed.
add grey cup to lead
- Added.
whered u get his death date of 23, pfa says 28 and obit says 24
- I remember there had been some IPs messing with that date...but anyway, since there's contradictions I just changed it to "April 2022"

Thats all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 09:50, 22 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 00:35, 24 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 14:52, 24 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]