Talk:Que Alguien Me Diga/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 05:58, 23 October 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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There are some minor copy adjustments and that's almost it. Please watch your quote fidelity, which I spotted in [1]. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 05:58, 23 October 2023 (UTC)

Thanks Sammi! I fixed all the issues brought up. Erick (talk) 15:32, 26 October 2023 (UTC)

Copy changes

• Several composers contributed to album's songwriting including Omar Alfanno who penned the track "Que Alguien Me Diga". Needs a "the" after "to". I'd like to see commas after "songwriting" and "Alfanno", as this actually has nested appositives.
• It also received a nomination at the 2000 El Premio de la Gente in the category of Song of the Year; but again lost to "A Puro Dolor". Remove the semicolon, as "but again lost to..." is not a standalone sentence. A comma would also be inappropriate.
• It was adopted in English Probably "adapted"

Spot checks

• 1: The quote is slightly inaccurate, which must be fixed.
  • Article: "combination of salsa with a mix of modern sounds"
  • Story: combination of "classic salsa with a mix of modern sounds"
• 3: AllMusic lists Alfanno as the writer for this song. Y
• 10: PRNewswire press release but for the winners at the Latino Music Awards. The reference data needs to make clear this is a press release. I would accept this for the list of winners and for "A Puro Dolor" winning in Song of the Year. Y
• 15: Billboard The Year in Music charts. Album is listed as second in both listed areas. Y
• 18: Inclusion of song and Alfanno having composed all tracks. Y

There are no images to review. Earwig shows no copyvio issues.

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