Talk:Quarrington, Lincolnshire/GA1
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Reviewer: MPJ-DK (talk · contribs) 03:06, 14 March 2016 (UTC)
Alright I will be picking up the review of this one - both for the Wiki Cup and the GA cup as well.
Side note, I would love some input on a Featured List candidate (Mexican National Light Heavyweight Championship) and a Featured Article candidate (CMLL World Heavyweight Championship). I am not asking for Quid pro Quo, but all help is appreciated. MPJ-US 03:06, 14 March 2016 (UTC)
Alright I will be picking up the review of this one - both for the Wiki Cup and the GA cup as well.
Side note, I would love some input on a Featured List candidate (Mexican National Light Heavyweight Championship) and a Featured Article candidate (CMLL World Heavyweight Championship). I am not asking for Quid pro Quo, but all help is appreciated. MPJ-US 04:25, 14 March 2016 (UTC)
GA Toolbox
[edit]I like to get this checked out first, I have found issues using this that has led to quick fails so it's important this passes muster.
- Peer review tool
- Nothing that actually applies to the article.
- Copyright violations Tool
- I believe http://english.my-definitions.com/en/define/Sleaford actually copied wikipedia, it even still has the header indicators even though they don't make a difference on that site.
- No legitimate issues found
- Disambiguation links
- No issues
- External links
- The following links are dead
- 27 – I assume this means reference 27? If so, then that link is working. I have added an archived link.
- 59 – Archive link provided.
- 78 – Archive link provided.
- 80 – Archive link provided.
- 65 – Archive link provided.
- 89 – Archive link provided.
- 99 – Archive link provided.
- Connection issues
- Link to metoffice.gov.uk – working fine for me
- Parliament.uk – working fine for me
- All resolved MPJ-US 14:51, 15 March 2016 (UTC)
Well Written
[edit]- Lead
- "Anglo-Saxon period, while mills" does not need the comma
- Done
- "In the 19th century the" comma after century
- Done
- Early
- "material has been" I believe "have" is appropriate here
- Done
- "pottery sherds", I assume that is supposed to be "shards"??
- No, sherds. Linked.
- "ten mills in" should be 10 since you use 11 and 12 in the same sentence
- Done
- "the 11 or 12" 11th? 12th?
- Sorry, but I can't see a problem with this sentence.
- Early and later modern
- "with exception of" should be "with the exception of"
- Done
- "By 1872 the" should be "By 1872, the"
- Done
- "In 1879 Lord Bristol" should be "In 1879, Lord Bristol"
- Done
- "sold much farmland" should that be "sold much of their farmland"
- Done
- Topography
- "and the to north" should be "and to the north"
- Done
- Economy
- "the population, while" does not need the comma
- Done
- Demographics
- "it were divided" should be "was", singular as it refers back to "the population"
- No, it refers to the population statistics: "the population statistics for the new Sleaford parish[,] which absorbed it[,] were divided into four wards".
- "Instead a church" should be "Instead, a church"
- Done
- Learned a new word today. Looking good now. MPJ-US 14:53, 15 March 2016 (UTC)
Sources/verifiable
[edit]- Generally looks reliable and well formed
Broad in coverage
[edit]- Looks like it's generally hitting the various sections normally in this type of articles.
Neutral
[edit]- It is very factual. straight forward, not prone to embellishment etc.
Stable
[edit]- I don't see any evidence of edit wars in the history, granted it has an extensive history but nothing jumped out at me.
Illustrated / Images
[edit]- Images need Alt text
- Licenses check out
@Noswall59: - I have completed my review, really not a lot of issues found. I would say that the article is 99% right now. So I will put it on hold for 7 days to allow you to work on it. MPJ-US 20:58, 14 March 2016 (UTC)
- @MPJ-DK: Thank you very much for taking the time to review this article. I have addressed most of your comments through these edits, but I have queried two or three of your points (see above). Cheers, —Noswall59 (talk) 11:43, 15 March 2016 (UTC).
Yep,looks good to me @Noswall59:. Passing for GA, congratulations. MPJ-US 14:55, 15 March 2016 (UTC)