Talk:QR III

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Some rewriting needed

"Quiet Riot III is the fifth studio album released by American heavy metal band Quiet Riot in 1986. The name of this recording is short for "Quiet Riot III", and was released in 1986. Despite the title, this is actually the band's fifth album; however it was on their third major label/worldwide release."

Filled with repetition and confused information. How is "Quiet Riot III" short for "Quiet Riot III" - The title of the album is short for itself? Looks to me as if the entery originally called the album "QRIII" and the sentance was to explain that. As the album cover shows the title as "QRIII" it seems to make sense that it should be presented as the title. I didn't see a source contradicting.

We also don't need two sentances in a row giving the release year. Additionally, we don't need to see that it was the fifth album twice within 3 sentances.

I'm going to do a bit of teaking to fix these glaring issues.

Medleystudios72 (talk) 18:10, 25 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]