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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 22:34, 14 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]


GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:


Infobox

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  • Nothing in article to support that the song was released as a digital download
Added reference.
  • Information in article needed to support the information about the song's genre, record label, writers, and producers
Added references for all.

Lead

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  • On June 7 of 2012, Ocean posted a small teaser video... Change "June 7 of 2012" to "June 7, 2012" for better prose
  • Ocean performed "Pyramids" during his 14 show Channel Orange tour through North America. Not sure if "14 show" is necessary
Both done

Background

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  • No issues

Composition

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  • No issues

Reception

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  • No issues

Promotion

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  • No issues

Chart

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  • No issues

References

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  • No issues


After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put it on hold at this time. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues which you believe do not affect good article status. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 (talk2me) 23:12, 14 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I believe I have addressed the complaints. Bruce Campbell (talk) 00:30, 15 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Since all issues have been addressed, I feel confident passing this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work! Rp0211 (talk2me) 04:59, 15 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]