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GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 14:37, 15 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:37, 15 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

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GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
    1.a checkY
    1.b checkY
  • 2
    2.a checkY
    2.b checkY
    2.c checkY
    2.d checkY (5.7% is highest, incidental parallels.)
  • 3
    3.a checkY
    3.b checkY
  • 4
    4.a checkY
  • 5
    5.a checkY
  • 6
    6.a checkY
    6.b checkY
  • No DAB links ☒N in ...and believes that in the case of Nyuserre both forms of cultic worship survived the transition from the Old Kingdom, throughout First Intermediate Period, and into the early Middle Kingdom. the Middle Kingdom is a DAB link.
  • No Dead links checkY
  • Images appropriately licensed checkY

Prose Suggestions

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Lead

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  • It is noted for its unusual location and many architectural deviations from contemporary designs. suggest It is noted for its unusual location and its many deviations from contemporary architectural designs.
  • Nyuserre first had to complete the unfinished monuments of his father, suggest Nyuserre first completed the unfinished monuments of his father,
  • Third, there is an unexplained square platform in the temple which signals to archaeologists that there may be an obelisk pyramidion nearby as well. suggest Third, there is an unexplained square platform in the temple which has led archaeologists to suggest that there may be an obelisk pyramidion nearby to it.
  • Nyuserre's cult may have survived the transition from the Old Kingdom to Middle Kingdom. Though this remains a contentious issue among Egyptologists. suggest Nyuserre's cult may have survived the transition from the Old Kingdom to Middle Kingdom, though this remains a contentious issue among Egyptologists.

Location and excavation

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  • Abusir assumed great import suggest Abusir gained great importance
  • was entombed as the second member of the necropolis. suggest became the second to be entombed in the necropolis.

Later history

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  • Nyuserre was the last king to build his funerary monument at Abusir; his successors Menkauhor, Djedkare Isesi and Unas abandoned the site in favour of sites elsewhere.[28][76][77] Abusir thus ceased to be the royal necropolis. suggest Nyuserre was the last king to build his funerary monument at Abusir. His successors Menkauhor, Djedkare Isesi and Unas abandoned the site in favour of sites elsewhere, and Abusir thus ceased to be used as a royal necropolis.
  • East of the mortuary temple, German Egyptologists unearthed thirty-one Greek burials between 1901 and 1904. These burials have been dated c. 375–350 BCE. suggest East of the mortuary temple, German Egyptologists unearthed thirty-one Greek burials dated between c. 375–350 BCE, from 1901 to 1904.

Additional comments by Lingzhi

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