Talk:Pyloromyotomy

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Really good lead section, I would briefly mention the function of the pylorus, something like "A pyloromyotomy is a surgical procedure in which an incision is made in the longitudinal and circular muscles of the pylorus, which functions to..." I would also delete the part about the mucosa being injured from the lead and leave that for a later section. Otherwise, great work. Let me know how I can continue providing feedback.