Talk:Pusher (The X-Files)/GA1

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 01:51, 23 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I'll perform a review.

To match with other articles, infobox should have 3 linked, then List of season 3 episodes, X-Files, to be removed.
Done!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Perhaps mention that its American before "science fiction", or say it aired on the Fox network in the United States to let people know.
Done!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Unlink television series per WP:OVERLINK
Done!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
episode can't really "premiered" how about "originally aired"
Done!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Fox Network should be Fox network
Done!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Only Fox should be linked
Done!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"Monster-of-the-Week" should be "monster-of-the-week"
Well, I've gone through and checked, and the consensus seems to have it capitalized (in books, etc.).--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"Pusher" earned a Nielsen household rating of 10.8, being watched by 16.2 million people." When? in its intital broadcast?
Done!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
people should be viewers
Done!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
unlink energy drinks per WP:OVERLINK
Done!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"classified ad" unlink it as per WP:OVERLINK
Done!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"Pusher" was written by Vince Gilligan and directed by Rob Bowman.[5] Gilligan wrote the episode". We know he wrote the episode already. Consider re-wording at the end
Done!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Fox Mulder should be Mulder in the "Production" section
Done!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Only link Fox in "Reception"
Done!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"The episode earned a Nielsen rating of 10.8" Above it says Nielsen household rating. Huh?
Done!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"glowing" isn't encyclopaedic. Re-word there
I've seen it used plenty of times. I just means to give praise. I'm just mixing the words up.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"gave the episode a positive review" could that be further explained?
I'm unsure where you're talking about.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"20 Coolest Moments in The X-Files" make The X-Files italic there
Done!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
What makes Ref. 2 a high-quality good source
Well, the website itself isn't the best, but it links to a primary source interview video with Dave Grohl.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Ref. 5 links to Season 2, when it should be to Season 3
Done!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Should be linked to "Fox Broadcasting Company" rather than "corporation"
Done!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
MTV is missing publisher (Viacom)
Done!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Ref. 15: All double quotes should be single quotes, as per WP:MOS. If you'd like to know more, see the FAC for Episode 2 of Twin Peaks
Done!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
In ref.s, avoid doubled periods
Where exactly are we talking about?--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Xposé is linked to a television series. Sure that its a magazine though.
Yeah, it's the TV version of the magazine, I believe. There isn't a wikipedia article for the mag yet, though.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
on TheXFiles.com should be "at TheXFiles.com"
Done!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"The X-Files Wiki, an external wiki". Repitive. Change to: "The X-Files, an external wiki". Will help for a possible FAC perhaps ;)
Done!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

This is a great article with minor issues to be fixed! On hold. TBran dl ey 23:38, 29 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! I believe I've fixed or addressed all the issues.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:28, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Yep, I have gone through and fixed the remaining issues. This article will pass. Congrats! TBran dl ey 16:39, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]