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Reviewer: J Milburn (talk · contribs) 22:17, 1 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

A few quick thoughts-

  • "in Traditional Chinese medicine" Does the T need to be capitalised?
  • "Its color is bright yellow" I think we've talked about this before (and it may have been you picking me up on it); surely, the colour is not bright yellow, the cap is. Equally, a dog's fur is not furry, but the dog is.
  • "The taste and odor of the flesh has been described variously as indistinct,[3] or bitter tasting with an odor of hickory leaves.[5]" Same thing- how about "Flesh has been described variously as tasting and smelling indistinct,[3] or tasting bitter with an odor of hickory leaves.[5]"
  • "Its color is bright yellow." Again, although brightness is a trait of the colour. You could say "Its yellow colouration is bright", but just something like "The stem is bright yellow" would probably be easier.
  • "intergrade" is a bit jargony. That said, I like the word, so I'm happy for it to stay if you feel it belongs there.

Great pictures, sources are fine, quick Googling around reveals nothing obvious missing. It's got an impressive veil! J Milburn (talk) 22:17, 1 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]