Talk:Pulp Fiction/GA3

GA Review

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Reviewer: RAP (talk · contribs) 14:57, 19 April 2012 (UTC) I will review this. RAP (talk) 14:57 19 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The section Awards season should be renamed Accolades

As a matter of fact, Award season and Awards should be merged.

Reference 99 is dead.
The plot section has some details which are frankly unimportant to the general plot of each segement. "In a virtually empty cocktail lounge". We don't really need to know the detailing of the room. "Television time for young Butch (Chandler Lindauer) is interrupted by the arrival of Vietnam veteran Captain Koons (Christopher Walken). Koons explains that he has brought a gold watch, passed down through generations of Coolidge men since World War I. Butch's father died of dysentery while in a POW camp, and at his dying request Koons hid the watch in his rectum for two years in order to deliver it to Butch. A bell rings, startling the adult Butch out of this reverie. He is in his boxing colors—it is time for the fight he has been paid to throw." This section is written in a story-like fashion, when it should be more plot-written.

Comment

Is the reviewer planning to conclude this review any time soon? Jezhotwells (talk) 03:09, 6 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The awards still need to be taken care of. RAP (talk) 14:02 6 May 2012 (UTC)

Looking over the history of the article it doesn't appear to be much response to other reviewers and many of their points still remain unresolved. AIRcorn (talk) 06:53, 7 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

This edit indicates something of an edit war. I think this should be closed now as a fail. Jezhotwells (talk) 18:44, 13 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

It's only at one revert so far. If it escalates, yes it will fail. RAP (talk) 19:05 13 May 2012 (UTC)

It's not an edit war. It will be discussed. Let Me Eat Cake (talk) 19:49, 13 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Unfortunately, due to the sudden burst of disagreement amongst contributing editors, i will have to Fail this. Please do continue with the suggested changes and try again at a later time. RAP (talk) 3:03 14 May 2012 (UTC)