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Reviewer: MrClog (talk · contribs) 20:30, 17 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Will review the article within 7 days. --MrClog (talk) 20:30, 17 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

First pass

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
    I fixed some small spelling mistakes. Per MOS:CONSISTENCY, I made sure the article consistently uses British English.
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
    Please see comments below.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
    Very good!
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
    Please take a look at the comments below, and ping me if you fixed one or more, so I'll strike them. --MrClog (talk) 22:37, 17 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

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  • Quite a lot of paraphrasing issues dealt with, but still some way to go. Amitchell125 20:03, 18 May 2019 (UTC)
  • p./pp. errors corrected. Amitchell125 14:43, 18 May 2019 (UTC)

Succesful "good article" nomination

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Now that all concerns above are addressed after the review was put on hold, the article has hereby succesfully passed its GA nomination. Congratulations! --MrClog (talk) 14:33, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]