Talk:Pru (album)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 08:43, 30 April 2017 (UTC)

Lead

• Add {{Other uses|Pru}}

• Added. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

• Pru is the debut studio album by → Pru is the debut and eponymous studio album by

• Added. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

• Can you create a stub about Pru?

• I may create a stub for Pru in the future, but I do not believe that it is necessary for this review. It also appears that this album is the only notable thing (by WIkipedia's standards) that she has done with her career. I can definitely come back to it in the future, but again I do not believe it is required for the review. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

• It spawned two singles: "Candles" and "Aaroma" → It was aided by two single releases, "Candles" and "Aaroma (of a Man)"

• Added. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

Background

• said that "Her lyrics were the thing that stood out the most for me → said that "her lyrics were the thing that stood out for [him]

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

Recording and sound

• You should rename the section to "Recording and composition"

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

• However, Pru is only credited as co-writing "Aaroma" in the album's liner notes, which lists her by both her full and professional names. → I don't get the meaning of this sentence

• Removed the last part. I added this part in as the previous sentence claims that Pru contributed to the songwriting for all of the album's tracks, but the album notes say otherwise. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

• Music critics identified the album as consisting → Music

• Not sure what you mean by this note. Could you please clarify this for me? Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

• New Age music → new age music

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

• Prior to signing a record deal, the singer → state "she" for alternation

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

• Top 40 music → top 40 music

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

Composition

• Release year in brackets for "The Tracks of My Tears"

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

• Hogan, alternatively, interpreted the song as "juxtaposition of the original message from "The Track of My Tears" → ?? + there's something wrong with the syntax

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

Release and instrumentation

• as an "enhanced audio CD" in which → no "in"

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

• that included members of the Family Stand → link Family Stand here

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

• radio in the US → don't shorten US

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

Reception

• Well done ;)

• Thank you Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

Track listing

• Fixed by myself

• Thank you Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

Personnel

• Fixed by myself

• Thank you Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

Charts

• flawless ;)

• Thank you Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

Release history

• Fixed by myself

• Thank you Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

Other stuff

Copy-violation

• 42.2% is slightly too much!

• If you check that, then you will see the 42.2% is coming from the album credits and that will have a high percentage as there will be the same names and credits for that (it is also directly cited that way in the article). Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

Links

• No problems here!

• Thank you. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

References

• As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article

• Thank you. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

• No dead links! Good job!

• Thank you. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

Outcome

•  On hold On hold for 7 days! Great article... Cartoon network freak (talk) 16:07, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

• Thank you for your comments! I believe that I have addressed all of your comments. Hope you are having a wonderful day so far. Aoba47 (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

Yes, I am, thanks! I'm passing this. Yay, Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:27, 6 May 2017 (UTC)

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