Talk:Propallene longiceps

A fact from Propallene longiceps appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 13 December 2020 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that the male sea spider Propallene longiceps carries fertilized eggs in bracelet-like masses wrapped around his legs?

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 19:00, 8 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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... that the male sea spider Propallene longiceps carries his eggs in bracelet-like masses which he wraps round his legs?

Reviewed: Pomato (company)

Created by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self-nominated at 09:57, 5 December 2020 (UTC).[reply]

@Cwmhiraeth:, excited to review this article about a sea spider, something I know very little about so I'm excited to learn more!

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: 2513 characters, no copyvios detected, qpq completed. The "bracelet" fact is super interesting I think and the drawing in the cited source of the "bracelets" is fascinating. My one question/quibble is in the hook you call the eggs "his eggs." Is that technically correct? Aren't they technically the females eggs? would removing "his" or changing "his" to "fertilized" be more correct? Found5dollar (talk) 23:30, 6 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

ALT1 ... that the male sea spider Propallene longiceps carries the fertilized eggs in bracelet-like masses wrapped around his legs?

@Found5dollar: Thank you for the review. I was concerned about the "his" as well, and "fertilized" is a better option. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:09, 8 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

ALT1 is good to go!Found5dollar (talk) 12:35, 8 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]