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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 03:55, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
- Section 1;
- Some context would be required on "National Intelligence Estimate 11-5-57"
- Done
- GOR-170? What do you mean by GOR?
- Done
- Mention "DARPA" in full on the first mention, also mention ARPA in full
- Done
- United States Air Force was over linked
- Done
- Section 1.1; All good
- Section 1.2;
- Expand NORAD
- Done
- The third phase of the project included several elements. These included: a powerful main engine; suggest rewording this as "The third phase of the project included several elements such as powerful main engine"
- Done
- Link "surface-to-air missiles"
- Done
- and four cameras to allow its operator to observe; suggest "and four cameras for observation"
- Done
- infrared, gravimetric sensors
- Done
- 12 meters (39 ft), 60 meters (200 ft); abrreviate, use
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- 12 meters (39 ft), 60 meters (200 ft); abrreviate, use
- I am unsure of how to implement this, If you wish for it to be 12 m (39ft) I can do that manually. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 05:03, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
- Go for it. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 05:13, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
- Done
- Go for it. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 05:13, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
- I am unsure of how to implement this, If you wish for it to be 12 m (39ft) I can do that manually. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 05:03, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
- Cape Canaveral, is over linked
- Done
- within range of one? What is this phrase, suggest explaining in general language
- Done
- Section 1.3;
- for December of 1962; just "for December 1962"
- Done
- The plan was originally for four SAINT launches -> It was planned to the launch four satellites
- Done
- the then Secretary of Defense Robert McNamara, remove "the"
- Done
- Lead;
- bold "SAtellite INTerceptor"
- Done
- Reference 4; 1963–65; make it 1963–1965, per MOS:DATERANGE
- Done
- Suggest adding an infobox. This is out of GA criteria, just a suggestion
- Sounds good, would I use a infobox for a military operation, or for a satellite? Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 05:03, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
- Suggest {{Infobox research project}}. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 05:13, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
- Done
- Suggest {{Infobox research project}}. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 05:13, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
- Sounds good, would I use a infobox for a military operation, or for a satellite? Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 05:03, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
- All images are appropriately licensed
- External links are good. Suggest archiving them, as a precaution.
- I don't have much experience with archiving links. Would I just use the Wayback machine and then cite the URL given by Wayback, or is there another way of doing it? Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 05:03, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
- Yeah, do it the same way. Just archive them. Even if they are dead in future, we can use the archives. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 05:13, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
- Done.
- Yeah, do it the same way. Just archive them. Even if they are dead in future, we can use the archives. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 05:13, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
- I don't have much experience with archiving links. Would I just use the Wayback machine and then cite the URL given by Wayback, or is there another way of doing it? Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 05:03, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
- 25% violation, unlikely. If possible rephrase some.
- Done.
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 03:55, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
- @Krishna Chaitanya Velaga: I believe I have fixed all of the issues you have raised, aside from the URL archiving, the infobox and the abbreviation template. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 05:03, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
- @Krishna Chaitanya Velaga: I believe that is everything. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 12:30, 11 January 2017 (UTC)
- @Krishna Chaitanya Velaga: Are you ready to pass it as it is right now, or do you feel it needs more work? Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 02:38, 12 January 2017 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 11:22, 13 January 2017 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail: