Talk:Process network synthesis
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Hello my name is dromedario and i can fly--80.32.53.204 (talk) 12:46, 11 January 2019 (UTC)--80.32.53.204 (talk) 12:46, 11 January 2019 (UTC)õĨ
Needs work to be understandable to laymen
[edit]I came to this page to try to understand this concept after hearing it for the first time, and it is way too technical for a person outside this industry to understand. I've read it several times and have gleaned virtually no information from it at all. Terms like "directed bipartite graph" and "P-graph method" do not mean anything to me and should be explained in a way that an average person can understand. The language in general is unnecessarily obtuse, for example, "employs combinatorial rules to find all feasible network solutions" and "detect optimum structures within the maximum available process flows." There are also grammatical errors including incomplete sentences ("Target value as well as the structure can be changed depending on the field of application").
I would try to improve the article myself, but as I mentioned, I don't know anything about the topic. It's not a very high-profile article, but I hope someone stumbles across this comment and makes some improvements someday. 70.178.58.115 (talk) 15:08, 27 April 2023 (UTC)