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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 10:01, 9 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Although I don't like politics that much, I am surprised how long it stayed in the queue (for almost 6 months!)--Kürbis (✔) 10:01, 9 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Not bad, but I expected a much larger article. Nevermind, here are my comments:

  • "and the term is renewable once" - I think this word is not appropiate here (I think it is more a scientific word), so perhaps replace it with a simple word like "changed"
"Renewable" is a better word then "Changed" in this instance. --TIAYN (talk) 20:18, 12 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Done "The current prime minister Nguyen Tan Dung has served since 2005, and is now serving his last term." - you already state this, so the last part is partially redundant. I am not sure how to reword that, though.
  • Done "The National Assembly by a proposal of the President of Vietnam elects the prime minister. " - reads a bit awkward, how about: The National Assembly elects the prime minister by a proposal of the President of Vietnam.
  • Done "and it is the Assembly which elects all ministers to government."
  • Done "When the prime minister is absent, the prime minister must choose one of his deputy prime ministers to direct the work of the government.[10]" - replace the underlined with "he"
  • Done The Bui reference does not lead to any citation--Kürbis (✔) 09:02, 10 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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