Talk:Pretzel Pezzullo
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A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on January 12, 2012. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Chicken Hawks, a Pie, and a Pretzel have all played in Major League Baseball? |
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Pretzel Pezzullo/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 19:13, 10 February 2012 (UTC)
I will be reviewing this article today. I will be leaving comments within the hours.
—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 19:13, 10 February 2012 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- Is there anyway you can move the citations out of the lead, per WP:LEADCITE?
- Moved the height and weight, kept the nickname reference because it is able to be challenged, and the sentence flows with the lead.
- Fair enough.
—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 03:23, 11 February 2012 (UTC)
- Fair enough.
- Moved the height and weight, kept the nickname reference because it is able to be challenged, and the sentence flows with the lead.
- Is there anyway you can move the citations out of the lead, per WP:LEADCITE?
- a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- A couple of sentence are missing a citation:
- "Pezzullo was born on December 10, 1910, in Bridgeport, Connecticut."
- "Combined, Pezzullo went 14–10 with a 5.19 ERA."
- "He went 5–16 the following year, before leaving the team for the Syracuse Chiefs and the Buffalo Bisons in his final year of professional baseball in 1941."
- Fixed.
- A couple of sentence are missing a citation:
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Google Image Search shows some pictures of Pezzullo. Can you upload one with a fair use rationale?
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Added.
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Once these comments are address, the article will pass.
- Pass/Fail:
Cool. It looks like this passes GA-criteria. Good job on the article.03:23, 11 February 2012 (UTC)
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