Talk:Pressure system/GA1

GA Review

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Disambiguation check: Done

Checklinks: 4 dead (Ref #'s 5, 10, 25, 19) Fixed

GA review (see here for criteria)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Prose is very good. Only one issue while reading, under Low pressure system in first paragraph a closing parentheses seems to be missing:

...within the Westerlies (a trough with large wavelength which extends through the (troposphere).

Fixed

Fix this and the dead links and I'll pass the article.

Reviewer: Lvi56 (talk) 05:39, 27 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Found/replaced 3 of the 4 dead links. As it turns out, former ref 10 wasn't necessary as the other refs, particularly the one now at #10, described it well enough on their own. The parenthesis problem has been fixed. Thegreatdr (talk) 06:08, 27 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good. I went ahead and fixed the red link that was under the High pressure section. I'll pass the article, good work!Lvi56 (talk) 06:39, 27 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]