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Reviewer: Smerus (talk · contribs) 11:04, 29 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Well written

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Overall absolutely acceptable. Two quibbles which I would raise:

  • History and words - 'Bach could count on the entire council (his employer) listening, and likely also civil servants' - 'probably' is better than 'likely' in colloquial English.
  • Scoring and structure - I suggest adding 'the musicologist' or 'the editor' before 'Alfred Durr' so that it is clear where this is coming from.

Verifiable with no original research

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Well sourced and cited as one would expect from this editor.

Broad in its coverage, Neutral

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Exemplary on both counts and well-focussed.

Stable

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No problems

Images

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Appropriate images and clear tables

Summary

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I have no problems in passing this for GA, but the editor might like to take a look at the two quibbles under "Well-written".--Smerus (talk) 11:04, 29 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, done, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:31, 29 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Excellent, super article.--Smerus (talk) 11:37, 29 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]