Talk:Prehistoric Orkney/GA1

GA Review

Starting GAR. Pyrotec (talk) 18:06, 20 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Initial scan

This appears to be a good, stable, well-referenced article. It will take me a day or so to review it. Pyrotec (talk) 09:03, 21 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

This article has an impressive number of in-line citations (101) and is generally well written: lying, possibly, somewhere between GA and FA. Having said that, the lede section could be improved, I made some minor changes; and I found some unreferenced statements. The final para in the main Neolithic section comparing Orkney with Egypt and Stonehenge needs a citation; as does the "Egypt of the North" citation in the Early Dwellings subsection; and the flow of ideas from south to north statement in the Heart of Neolithic Orkney subsection. Nevertheless, the majority of the article is at an acceptable level, so I'm awarding GA status now.

Congratulations on the article and thanks for the work that went into producing it. Pyrotec (talk) 15:06, 21 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Many thanks for the review. I will attend to the above as well asap. Ben Mac Dui

Now done. Ben Mac Dui 08:46, 28 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]