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Nominator: Just-a-can-of-beans (talk · contribs) 18:40, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: IntentionallyDense (talk · contribs) 19:21, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]


A medical GAN that's also a disorder???? My favourite! I'll get around to reviewing this within the next 2-3 days but expect some initial comments at some point today (hopefully). IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 19:21, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much! Just-a-can-of-beans (talk) 19:42, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Rate Attribute Review Comment
1. Well-written:
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.
1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.
2. Verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check:
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 21:33, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
2c. it contains no original research.
2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism.
3. Broad in its coverage:
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 21:33, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 21:33, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 21:33, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
7. Overall assessment.

= Initial comments

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  • This article looks a little short and I was able to find quite a few extra sources not used upon a quick google search. I'm not saying that this article doesn't go into enough depth, since I haven't fully assessed that yet, however I'm wondering if there is some information missing here? I'll list the other sources I found in case you want to see if they can add to the article:
    • Robinson, Robert G.; Jorge, Ricardo E. (2016-03-01). "Post-Stroke Depression: A Review". American Journal of Psychiatry. 173 (3): 221–231. doi:10.1176/appi.ajp.2015.15030363. ISSN 0002-953X.
    • Towfighi, Amytis; Ovbiagele, Bruce; El Husseini, Nada; Hackett, Maree L.; Jorge, Ricardo E.; Kissela, Brett M.; Mitchell, Pamela H.; Skolarus, Lesli E.; Whooley, Mary A.; Williams, Linda S. (2017). "Poststroke Depression: A Scientific Statement for Healthcare Professionals From the American Heart Association/American Stroke Association". Stroke. 48 (2). doi:10.1161/STR.0000000000000113. ISSN 0039-2499.
    • Guo, Jianglong; Wang, Jinjing; Sun, Wen; Liu, Xinfeng (2022). "The advances of post-stroke depression: 2021 update". Journal of Neurology. 269 (3): 1236–1249. doi:10.1007/s00415-021-10597-4. ISSN 0340-5354.
    • Espárrago Llorca, G.; Castilla-Guerra, L.; Fernández Moreno, M.C.; Ruiz Doblado, S.; Jiménez Hernández, M.D. (2015). "Post-stroke depression: an update". Neurología (English Edition). 30 (1): 23–31. doi:10.1016/j.nrleng.2012.06.006.
    • Villa, Roberto Federico; Ferrari, Federica; Moretti, Antonio (2018). "Post-stroke depression: Mechanisms and pharmacological treatment". Pharmacology & Therapeutics. 184: 131–144. doi:10.1016/j.pharmthera.2017.11.005.
    • Wei, Na; Yong, Wu; Li, Xinyan; Zhou, Yafan; Deng, Manfei; Zhu, Houze; Jin, Huijuan (2015). "Post-stroke depression and lesion location: a systematic review". Journal of Neurology. 262 (1): 81–90. doi:10.1007/s00415-014-7534-1. ISSN 0340-5354.
  • I noticed you didn't stick with the typically used Template:Article templates/Medical condition. There's no issue with this I'm just a bit curious as to why? IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 21:33, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]