Talk:Porcelain Black/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jennie--x (talk · contribs) 11:50, 28 August 2012 (UTC)

Initial Comments

• Lead

• The claim that Black gained a "cult following" needs to be sourced as it could be challenged.
• "Musically, she fuses industrial themes with pop music conventions such as electronic synths and a heavy reliance upon hooks. The combination polarizing opinions, she is best known for her guttural vocals and two-toned hair." This doesn't make sense fully - what combination is polarizing opinion? Pop/industrial music or guttural vocals/two-toned hair -- could this be arranged more clearly? Furthermore, are there sources that prove something is polarizing?

•  Done I decided to remove both concerns, as they seem to violate WP:BLP. Originally, I believed the sources under "Public Image" supported the polarization of opinion, but that might be original research. "Cult following" was OR obtained from source 5 which mentions the Myspace fandom.--Thevampireashlee (talk) 02:04, 29 August 2012 (UTC)

• Life and career

•  Done

• Artistry

• Minor grammar note: The sentence "Often, comparisons are drawn between her and Lady Gaga[23][24][25] But, she has also been compared to...", the "But" should be lower case and there should be a comma after Lady Gaga.

•  Done Got it. Fixed the pesky coordinating conjunction. --Thevampireashlee (talk) 02:04, 29 August 2012 (UTC)

• Personal life

•  Done

• Discography, filmography and tours

•  Done

• References

•  Done

Overall Summary

GA review Final Summary
It is reasonably well written. a (Is there clear sentences, spelling and grammar?): Y b (Does it comply with MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists?): Y It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (Is there a references section?): Y b (Are there citations for quotes/statistics/challenging info?): Y c (Does it contain no original research?): Y It is broad in its coverage. a (Does it cover the major aspects of the topic?): Y b (Does it use summary style?): Y It follows the neutral point of view policy. (Are points made with due weight?): Y It is stable. (Are there no edit wars, etc?): Y It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (Do the images have appropriate fair-use rationales?): Y b (Do the images have suitable captions?): Y
Overall: Pass/Fail: Pass - A well-written article that makes the use of excellent reliable sources, congratulations to the editors and nominator Thevampireashlee.
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