Talk:Pomegranate Seed (short story)
Peer Review
[edit]- Excellent overview, and plot summary sections. The entire page looks very well set up, and well-informed.
- I would change the first sentence of the second paragraph in the Plot Summary section to say something like "Since returning from their honeymoon, Kenneth Ashby has been receiving strange letters." Because the next sentence also begins with the word "ever" which is too similar to "every" which is what the first sentence currently begins with - just makes it flow smoother.
- Under the "Characters" sections for Kenneth's description, I would change the first sentence to "... previously married to the late Elise Ashby" - again just makes the sentence flow better.
- The "Significance of the Title" section is very useful for the outside information that researchers may need while trying to understand this story. But the section title is a little clunky - something like "Title Relevance" would do better. DiggiM (talk) 18:19, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
Peer Review
[edit]- The plot summary is very well written. It does not show any personal emotions and provides the reader with a good understanding of what occurs throughout the text.
- The major themes section is well thought out and written very well.
- The article is very neutral and unbiased- I didn't feel like any points were leading me to believe one thing over another
- I would like to see more in the supernatural section- a better understanding of hauntology and how it is portrayed throughout the story
- Overall it is a really well-done page and is written very well. I didn't feel swayed in any way about the topics discussed and felt like I got the information I would be looking for on a Wikipedia page.