Talk:Poison (Final Fight)/GA1
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[edit]- "is a video game character from the Final Fight video game series" - don't need to say VG twice
- "According to All About Capcom Head to Head Fighting Games" - what's that? (A book?)
- "might have gotten a "sex change"" - add wlink, remove quotation marks (are they needed?)
- The 2005 in VG link isn't really needed.
- "The discrepancy regarding Poison was addressed in an interview featured in the January 2008 issue of Electronic Gaming Monthly regarding Street Fighter IV. Capcom's Yoshinori Ono when asked in the interview regarding Poison's gender stated" - a bit overly wordy - eg the repeated "regarding Poison"... give it a trim/reword.
- "Poison's alt outfit" --> "Poison's alternate outfit"? (image caption)
- Some references (randomly spotted #10) need publisher information.
- Some wlinking needed in the In video games section (pole dancing as a random example - check for more)
And please leave me a note when done. Cheers —Giggy 05:33, 11 July 2008 (UTC)