Talk:Plastic Brit/GA1

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Reviewer: Adam Cuerden (talk · contribs) 15:04, 21 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

"The term was used to describe a number of amateur wrestlers who had not been born in the UK and had been British citizenship." - please clarify. More soon. Adam Cuerden ^(talk) 15:04, 21 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Done that one. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 07:28, 22 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

""Then there are cases where there is support but they go because there is a bigger gain in another country. Legally we can't stop it but it doesn't mean we love it."[18]" - I presume this makes sense in the context of the speech, but "support" and "gain" are largely undefined as it's used in the article. I'd suggest paraphrasing more of it. Adam Cuerden ^(talk) 10:10, 22 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

As for the rest... well, it could use a copyedit, frankly. The last section, in particular, seems to present the facts in a slightly random order. Nothing enough to cause it not to pass GA, but it's worth doing. Adam Cuerden ^(talk) 10:21, 22 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

It did have a copyedit from GOCE on 4 February. That being said, I have moved that last paragraph around a bit to try to make it a bit clearer as it is a series of athletes criticising the Plastic Brit term. I have also added some clarity to the quote for context. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 10:39, 22 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I'm happy enough. Promoted. Adam Cuerden ^(talk) 10:52, 22 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]