Talk:Planet Earth Live

Planet Earth Live was a Media and drama good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.

Article milestones
Date	Process	Result
September 29, 2010	Good article nominee	Not listed

A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on May 12, 2010.

The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Planet Earth Live is a BBC nature documentary that will premier with orchestral accompaniment in large cities throughout the United States during the 2010 summer?

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Planet Earth Live/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Nikkimaria (talk) 02:34, 29 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! I will be reviewing this article for possible GA status. My review should be posted shortly. Nikkimaria (talk) 02:34, 29 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality:
Prose is repetitious and of mediocre quality. Excessive use of the verb "to feature", particularly in the lead. Lead tense does not match article. Suggest copy-editing to improve clarity and flow.

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
Lead includes information not mentioned in article text. Layout is inefficient and involves excessive white space. Should not repeat references in External links. Some inappropriate/uncited use of words to watch.
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources:
See here for problematic links. Need more independent sources.

B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
Because of the dead link, I am unable to verify that ref 4 supports the statistics regarding the television show.

C. No original research:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects:
The first sentence: "Planet Earth Live is a 2010 BBC nature documentary film". However, the almost exclusive focus of the article is the premiere/tour. Need more information about the film and less about the tour to be balanced and to cover all major aspects.

B. Focused:
Undue weight given to information on the tour.
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
See above concern regarding WP:W2W
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc:
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
Why are there 5 images and 6 venues?
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
Unfortunately, not at GA status at this time. Please re-nominate once the concerns here have been adequately addressed. Nikkimaria (talk) 03:01, 29 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]