Talk:Plandemic/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 18:40, 13 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 18:40, 13 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Some Dude From North Carolina, thanks for picking this up! Gerald WL 01:42, 15 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

In the third sentence, it should be mentioned that you're talking about the first video.
Done.
Other than that, the image and the lead are well-written without any other issues.

Background

"in March 11" → "on March 11"
Done.
The last sentences in a few paragraph need references.
"bioweapon control" → "bioweapon to control"
Done.

First video

"in future" → "in the future"
Done.
The last sentence from #Reception needs a reference, and Plandemic: Indoctornation doesn't have to be linked.
I moved it to Indoctornation's production, since it's more relevant there. The last unreferenced bit's removed.

Plandemic: Indoctornation

Fair-use rationale is in good condition, so that's good.
Add a comma after "Google".
Done.
"jeopardised" → "jeopardized" (consistency with the rest of the article)
Done.
"had interest" → "had an interest"
Done.

Sinclair Broadcasting Group

Couldn't find any major issues here.

References

Sources are archived already.
Websites are also linked.

External links

Is the link to Rotten Tomatoes necessary if it doesn't have a score?
You're right... removed it. Gerald WL 01:34, 15 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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