Talk:Pieter Nuyts/GA1
GA Review
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Comments by Rubenescio
[edit]In want to address a few issues before I will review the article:
- Wasn't he also three times mayor of Hulster Ambacht? [1]
- Didn't Anna van Driel die while giving birth to their son Pieter? [2]
- Was he involved in the Siege of Hulst in 1645?
- Where did he die and where is he buried?
Rubenescio (talk) 10:11, 8 May 2009 (UTC)
- The words "imprisonment" and "house arrest" are used interchangeably, but they have a rather different connotation. Could this be clarified?
Rubenescio (talk) 11:00, 8 May 2009 (UTC)
- To address your points in order:
- You're right - added that.
- Yes, but the article already says she "died [...] giving birth". I think it is clear already, but adding "while" would be OK too.
- Nope, he arrived shortly afterwards - text and reference added.
- Can't be 100% sure where he died, although I assume it was in Hulst - however, no source I have actually says that outright. He was definitely buried there though - added info and reference.
- Clarified.
- I've also done a quick style edit. Appreciate all the hard work you have put in so far, and well done on finding that Australian map. Taffy (talk) 15:03, 8 May 2009 (UTC)
Review
[edit]- Well-written: ✓ Pass
- Factually accurate and verifiable: ✓ Pass
- Broad in its coverage: ✓ Pass
- Neutral: ✓ Pass
- Stable: ✓ Pass
- Illustrated: ✓ Pass