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Reviewer: Malleus Fatuorum (talk · contribs) 00:52, 22 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • This article reads more like an essay than a Wikipedia article. The following sections are completely uncited: Solar array arrangements, Fixed arrays, Single axis trackers, Power conversion, Centralised inverters, Transformers, System performance, The business of developing solar parks, Planning approval, Grid connection, Operation and maintenance, Economics and Finance, Incentive mechanisms, Feed-in tariffs, Renewable portfolio standards and supplier obligation, and probably a few others I've missed. I'm putting the review on hold pending some serious attention to citations and sourcing. Malleus Fatuorum 00:52, 22 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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  • "A photovoltaic power station, also known as a solar park, is a large-scale photovoltaic system designed for the supply of merchant power into the electricity grid. They are differentiated from most building-mounted and other decentralised solar power applications because they supply power at the utility level". A couple of problems with that: first of all the discrepancy between "is" and "they", and secondly they're not differentiated because they supply power at the utility level, that's what differentiates them.
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