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A-class review

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I am nominating this article for A-class status because it meets all of the criteria. Feel free to give feedback. XR228 (talk) 01:05, 8 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

HickoryOughtShirt?4 comments

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  • I would recommend archiving all the links in this article since the NHL lives to mess with their website so much.
  • Since this isn't mentioned anywhere else in the article, there needs to be a source for his bday and birth place. I would typically add an early life section and add his bday, birthplace, and parents but if you cannot find enough information, I think it can be merged into early career.
  • I think the line about his draft can just be merged into either the above or below paragraph. It looks a bit off by itself.
  • Grubauer played most of the 2014–15 season with Hershey.... I would add a bit more detail about how he did while with Hershey. In this article, it says Grubauer went 27-17-5 (2.30 goals-against average, .921 save percentage, six shutouts) during the regular season and climbed to No. 7 in all-time Hershey shutouts (11) and No. 14 in all-time wins (55). I would say these are some pretty impressive stats. I also don't see any mention about his all time record with the Bears, which seems to be quite impressive by the end of his tenure with the Capitals organization.
  • Luckily, goaltender Joey Daccord stepped up I would argue the word "luckily" doesn't match a neutral tone and the word goaltender is redundant. Maybe replace it with "In his place, Joey Daccord stepped up and helped the Kraken..... HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 00:56, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @HickoryOughtShirt?4: Thanks for the review! I'll get to doing this stuff soon. From what I remember, this seems to pretty much be a GA review. Could you also check this article against the FA criteria if you haven't already (knowing the GA/FA criteria is not my forte).
    Oh, and I'll also ping @Alaney2k because he said he'd do a review as well. XR228 (talk) 03:16, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I'll probably get to doing this stuff sometime today or tomorrow. XR228 (talk) 17:28, 16 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]