This article must adhere to the biographies of living persons (BLP) policy, even if it is not a biography, because it contains material about living persons. Contentious material about living persons that is unsourced or poorly sourcedmust be removed immediately from the article and its talk page, especially if potentially libellous. If such material is repeatedly inserted, or if you have other concerns, please report the issue to this noticeboard.If you are a subject of this article, or acting on behalf of one, and you need help, please see this help page.
This article is rated Start-class on Wikipedia's content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects:
This article was reviewed by member(s) of WikiProject Articles for creation. The project works to allow users to contribute quality articles and media files to the encyclopedia and track their progress as they are developed. To participate, please visit the project page for more information.Articles for creationWikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creationTemplate:WikiProject Articles for creationAfC articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Biography, a collaborative effort to create, develop and organize Wikipedia's articles about people. All interested editors are invited to join the project and contribute to the discussion. For instructions on how to use this banner, please refer to the documentation.BiographyWikipedia:WikiProject BiographyTemplate:WikiProject Biographybiography articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Molecular Biology, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of Molecular Biology on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Molecular BiologyWikipedia:WikiProject Molecular BiologyTemplate:WikiProject Molecular BiologyMolecular Biology articles
A few suggestions for this page: the last statement in the Career section is followed by a zillion citations. As outlined on the page Wikipedia:Citation overkill there should be at most three citations there. Consider choosing a couple that are the most reliable and say the statement the best. You can then delete the others or if you feel a need to include those sources just add material to the article from them, and in that way you can keep them. Another problem I see with the article is that for better readability citations aught to go after commas, although it is better to put them all after the period at the end of the sentence. Also the Career section is pretty dense and I have a hard time reading it, perhaps due all the short sentences, wikilinks, and external links. Speaking of which, external links belong in the External Links section at the end of the article, not in the body, according to Wikipedia:External links. I'm not trying to blast the article or anything, I'm just trying to note down what I see as problems with it, in the hopes that someone will fix it so that its a good read for everyone. Thanks. Jessemv (talk) 06:12, 23 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
