Talk:Phi Kappa Mu/Archive 1

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Archive 1

Page creation note

Currently updating the page to conform to Wikipedia Standards

2019 - copy edit run

Last update on this talk page was 10 years ago. Noting that I did a copy edit run and found it more review and cleanup. Issues:

Only one source provided
One source is cited three times, but many claims in the article are without citation
There are numerous peacock terms used throughout, with individuals being labeled as "eminent" or "Father of" without supporting RS material provided. I labeled examples of the peacock terms.

Thanks, Curdigirl (talk) 10:03, 4 November 2019 (UTC)

2021 - Recent Updates

Greetings, as a member of the Fraternity in question I have taken it upon myself to update certain details in the page while also attempting to resolve previous comments. Changelog so far

Added other references
Added more notable alumni, attempted to change the wording to prevent the use of peacock terminology
Added an entirely new section highlighting the Service Projects of the Fraternity

If there are any concerns or questions you are free to contact me here Ultimagnusv2 (talk) 7:19, 16 September 2021 (PST)