Talk:Phantom's Revenge/GA1

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 03:04, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Might as well do this one too while we're at it as the last remaining 2012 recreation nom. Comments to come soon. Wizardman 03:04, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Will do this tonight, almost forgot about it. Wizardman 14:56, 5 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

"When opened in 1991" When it opened
"After the 2000," Not sure what this is trying to say exactly.
"of Mitch Hawker s " Hawker's?
"Due to the modifications, both Morgan and Arrow track are used on the coaster." could this be better explained? I see Morgan and Arrow are mentioned later on, perhaps move a bit of that to here.
" with 2 trains." and " opened with 4 inversions" with two trains and with four inversions. Generally single-digit numbers are written out.
"Before the renovation, the length was 3,000 feet (910 m), the lift remained unchanged." and the lift

I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when fixed. Wizardman 03:39, 6 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I have addressed all your comments.-- Astros4477 (Talk) 14:41, 6 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Everything checks out now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman 02:43, 7 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]