Talk:Peter-assment/GA1
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Reviewer: Grapple X (talk · contribs) 16:01, 13 December 2011 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- Not a problem with the citations.
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- Given that you include some criticism of a joke in the episode, the actual scene should be mentioned in the plot summary or recapped along with the criticism. As is, it's pretty out of context.
- I'm not sure what you are referring to. If you are referring to the Schiavo joke, it is mentioned in the first sentence of plot. Please explain. Gage (talk) 05:11, 14 December 2011 (UTC)
- Oh, that's it? I sort of assumed the joke would be more offensive than that. Ah well, guess we're complete then. GRAPPLE X 10:01, 14 December 2011 (UTC)
- I'm not sure what you are referring to. If you are referring to the Schiavo joke, it is mentioned in the first sentence of plot. Please explain. Gage (talk) 05:11, 14 December 2011 (UTC)
- Given that you include some criticism of a joke in the episode, the actual scene should be mentioned in the plot summary or recapped along with the criticism. As is, it's pretty out of context.
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Neutrality seems okay to me.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- History is stable.
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- The image of Fisher is commons, no problem there. The rationale for the screenshot seems a bit cursory and boilerplate, though. Try to specify why it's relevant to the episode in question, showing the episode's two main roles in a key plot point.
- Removed. Gage (talk) 05:11, 14 December 2011 (UTC)
- The image of Fisher is commons, no problem there. The rationale for the screenshot seems a bit cursory and boilerplate, though. Try to specify why it's relevant to the episode in question, showing the episode's two main roles in a key plot point.
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Just going to hold this one for now, shouldn't take long at all to fix the 3A and 6A issues there. GRAPPLE X 16:01, 13 December 2011 (UTC)
- Pass or Fail:
Concerns addressed, article's good to go. Well done! GRAPPLE X 10:01, 14 December 2011 (UTC)