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Request for Feedback: Compliance with BLP Guidelines

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Hello, fellow editors,

I have been working on improving the article about Pete Ondeng to ensure it complies with Wikipedia's Biographies of Living Persons (BLP) policy. I would greatly appreciate your feedback and suggestions on the following points:

  1. Sources:
    • Are the sources cited in the article sufficient and reliable?
    • Are there any sources you recommend replacing or adding to strengthen the article's credibility?
  2. Neutrality:
    • Does the tone of the article adhere to Wikipedia's neutrality standards?
    • Are there any parts of the article that seem promotional or overly subjective?
  3. Contentious Material:
    • Are there any statements or sections that need revision or removal due to lack of reliable sources or potential for controversy?
  4. Overall Structure and Clarity:
    • Does the article flow logically and present information in a clear and accessible way?
    • Are there additional sections or details that should be included or removed?

I aim to create a well-balanced and fully compliant article, and your expertise would be invaluable in achieving this goal. Thank you in advance for taking the time to review the article and share your input.

Best regards,

Emily Emiliene k (talk) 10:16, 21 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]