Talk:Personnel grouping (gridiron football)

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Feedback

@Yobelm: Hello!

First of all, I apologize for the late feedback. I was not aware that the article had been made live and was no longer in your sandbox, which is where I had been checking since I added your sandbox URL to the WikiEdu dashboard. Clearly, I'm still trying to figure out how to navigate this website! Now that I've finally updated the link...

I think what you have thus far is great! I will be making a few minor edits as far as grammar and readability, but I'm currently doing a bit of research on your topic as I want to be clear about what it is you're trying to say.
Is there any reason you have not included live/active URLs in your references?
I would encourage you to utilize more internal linking to other Wikipedia pages. I'm also writing a sports-related article and find it helpful to provide links when they are available, more specifically when you're writing in a sort of sporty-lingo that might not be easily understood to the casual reader.
The last section is a bit number heavy. Generally speaking, numbers between zero and nine should be written out as opposed to numerically.

Otherwise, great job!

--Cherysei (talk) 00:12, 3 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]