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[edit]Overall, the article of Winter squash is organized and visually pleasing. However, there are some sentences that are slightly awkward and need to be revised. For example, the first sentence could be revised as: "Winter squash is an annual fruit of squash within the genus Cucurbita." Some other sentences to revise: - Squash is a frost-tender plant meaning that the seeds do not germinate in cold soil. the word 'meaning' here needs to be deleted and replaced - It is harvested whenever the fruit has turned a deep, solid color and the skin is hard. be specific, what was 'it'?
Say the sentences out loud, this has helped me numerous times to correct sentences in the past!
You're doing a great job, happy editing! - Emily S.