Talk:Pennsylvania Route 664/GA1

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Comments:

1. The sentences "The southern terminus is at State Route 120 in Lock Haven. The northern terminus is at State Route 44 on the Clinton-Lycoming county line in the community of Haneyville." should be combined.
2. Can the lead be expanded with more information from the route description and history?
3. Change "crossing in the northern limits of Lock Haven" to "leaving Lock Haven".
4. "While winding a few curves" sounds awkward.
5. The sentence "The route's surroundings are well-developed in Dunnstown, with homes following the highway." sounds awkward also.
6. The route description has only two wikilinks. Can more links be added to routes and municipalities?
7. "starts winding in different directions"? What directions?
8. In phrase "rather large hairpin turn", "rather large" is unnessecary.
9. Change "begins its stretch towards Haneyville" to "heads towards Haneyville".
10. The sentence "The next stretch of State Route 664 is full of curves in different directions, turning at a constant rate." sounds awkward.
11. "continuing northward on its way to Haneyville": it is redundant to mention road is heading toward Haneyville again.
12. What is this "small community" along the road called?
13. The sentence "Eventually, the large patch of forests come to a clearing, where Old Dirt Road intersects." sounds awkward.
14. Change "gains the moniker of the" to "becomes".
15. Again indicate what "small community" the highway passes through.
16. "ends uneventfully"? Remove "uneventfully.
17. The route description is mostly sourced from Yahoo Maps. Can any other sources be added?
18. In the sentence "The first segment, which occurred in 1935, was from Little Plum Run Road and northward", indicate that this was the first segment to be paved.
19. Indicate what "the town line" is.
20. The history of the route seems to just describe when individual segments of the route were paved. Can any other historical information be added?
21. In the major intersections table, are the road names known?
22. Can any pictures of the route be added to the article?

I am placing the article on hold. Dough4872 (talk) 16:58, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

Changes made for every single one but #s 17, 20, and 22. You know how hard it is to get PA references in the first place, so its not easy to put more sources in.Mitch/HC32 20:15, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

I will pass the article. Dough4872 (talk) 16:47, 30 June 2009 (UTC)