Talk:Pennsylvania Route 546/GA1

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Comments:

1. The north end parameter in the infobox needs to be properly formatted to say "Cattaraugus CR 45 at New York state line in Otto Township"
2. Request a shield for Cattaraugus CR 45.
3. Redundant to indicate Duke Center is in Pennsylvania.
4. Fix spelling of "Cattarugaus County"
5. Can more historical information be added to the lead?
6. Duke Center is not a borough.
7. The sentence "Duke Center is moderately developed, with PA 546 heading along the center of the community." sounds awkward.
8. In the sentence "The community and PA 546 follow along the base of the 2,000 feet (610 m) mountain.", change "follow" to "run".
9. Knapp Creek links to an unrelated creek in West Virginia.
10. "local community"? Sounds awkward, I would suggest removing the word "local".
11. "of which the road is named for": remove "of".
12. "A short distance and through several taller mountains, reaching as high as 2,200 feet (670 m) tall." is a sentence fragment.
13. Fix spelling of "Cattaraugarus County".
14. "but the highway was not complete in terms of construction" sounds wordy, rephrase to "but the highway was not completely constructed."
15. Comma not needed in sentence "The lone bridge constructed along PA 546, was a concrete slab bridge over Knapp Creek."
16. "Annual Average Daily Traffic" should be in all lowercase letters.
17. Per the WP:ELG, the county and location columns are not to be used for roads entirely within one county and location.
18. Are the names for the routes in the major intersections table known?
19. Can you add a picture of the route to the article?

I am placing the article on hold. Dough4872 (talk) 17:51, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

Done. (And for the 2nd one - request made) - Mitch/HC32 20:31, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

I will pass the article. Dough4872 (talk) 01:22, 3 July 2009 (UTC)