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Needs inline sources.

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Thanks from everybody to GMS777 for the many edits made to the Paula Spencer article. I have done some work on it to make it read in a more encyclopedic style suitable to Wikipedia. The piece has some repetition and needs more inline sources. For example, all of the awards should be cited to a neutral source. This is just one example. I've tried to take out most of what reads like a PR blurb for Ms. Spencer, but frankly the whole piece still has the air of some kind of fawning adulation. (Maybe I am being too strong here.) For more information, kindly read wp:OR if you have not already done so. Improvements to the article can always be discussed on the Talk Page accompanying the article itself. Yours sincerely, GeorgeLouis (talk) 06:09, 5 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]