Talk:Paul George/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 14:31, 26 January 2024 (UTC)

@GhostRiver are you able to complete this review? -- asilvering (talk) 17:04, 21 March 2024 (UTC)

Hi Asilvering. Sorry. I don't think so. Lots of personal upheaval in my life. Bit off more than I could chew. — GhostRiver 18:27, 23 March 2024 (UTC)

@GhostRiver Sorry to hear it! I'll put it up for a second opinion. -- asilvering (talk) 20:10, 23 March 2024 (UTC)

Hello! My name is GhostRiver, and I'll be conducting this GA review. I will assess the article against the good article criteria. Once I complete my review, you will have seven days to implement the suggested edits.

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Personal life

• As mentioned below, Sportskeeda is not a reliable source. Please just use the People magazine reference to talk about his wife
• Rather than the link to the Apple Podcasts page, I'd use a third-party source (like this Athletic article to discuss his podcast
• Link Nike to Nike, Inc.
• George signed with Nike in his rookie season and had his first signature shoe debut in 2017 with the line ending in 2022. In January 2024, George stated the Nike would retro release his earlier models in the future. → George signed with Nike as a rookie and had a signature footwear and apparel line from 2017 to 2022. In 2024, George announced that Nike would re-release his earlier sneaker models.

Removed unreliable source and included the athletic article about his podcast. Hyperlinked Nike and fixed sentence cohesion about his shoeline. Thanks for the feedback! - fiveXdollars

References

• The link to George's NBA.com profile is broken, please use this one
• The reference formatting is a mess and needs to be standardized. For instance, ESPN references are at times listed as "ESPN," ESPN.com", and "espn.go.com"
• Many references are incomplete, including a stretch from 64 to 72.
• Per MOS:ALLCAPS, any references listed in all caps should be changed to title case
• SBNation and Sportskeeda are not reliable sources. Neither are Twitter or Bleacher Report.
• You absolutely cannot use a caption from a Wikimedia Commons article as a source.

Links are standardized, live/archived and no longer incomplete. Unreliable sources have been replaced. Confused about ALLCAPS, can you provide an example of a title that needs to be changed? Thanks in advanced! - fiveXdollars

Other comments

• As failed GAN is over ten years old, I will not be measuring this one against that one
• Earwig copyvio score looks good, mostly picking up proper nouns
• No major stability concerns, only general updates
• Photos are properly licensed and relevant to the article