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Concerns re this article

While I was very glad to find that there was a Wiki article about Patricia Rae, I have to say that I am rather surprised that this particular article was given approval at Articles for Creation. It comes across somewhat like a promotional piece, with the repeated use of the subject's first name throughout giving it a breezy tone -- which is not surprising given that the main author is apparently somebody who is directly connected with the subject. In light of the fact that the editor's submissions were repeatedly rejected by Articles for Creation, I am really puzzled that this won approval. In my opinion it needs to be thoroughly overhauled (perhaps even started over from scratch). Cgingold (talk) 11:29, 29 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]