Talk:Path (album)
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Path (album) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: August 27, 2024. (Reviewed version). |
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Nominator: Skyshifter (talk · contribs) 23:05, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 18:23, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
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Pretty clean. Just some minor grammar fixes and a passage needing rewording. Ping me when done. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 18:45, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
Did you know? If you fancy doing so, I always have plenty of GA nominees to review. Just look for the all-uppercase titles in the Television section. Reviews always appreciated.
Copy changes
[edit]- MOS:'S — A lot of cases of "Kraus'" etc. need fixing.
- Done
- accepted to release the album. maybe "agreed"?
- Done
- A music video for "Bum" was released on June 6, which Fred Pessaro of Revolver described as colorful. Reorganize sentence. Is June 6 "colorful"?
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- Chicago Reader's Leor Galil said that Kraus "expresses himself even more clearly" when compared to End Tomorrow, while highlighting Remove comma
- Done
Sourcing and spot checks
[edit]- nostalgia by referencing a VHS recording of the X Games Reword as too close to the source review from Pitchfork.
- Done
- 7: Stereogum review contains "barreling" quote on "Bum", but I do not see a date reference for the single in here.
- I don't know how I got that February 18 date in there, but it should be February 28, the same date the Stereogum article was published, so it should be fine.
- 8: Bandcamp confirms release date.
- 11: Chicago Reader review has clearer lyrics, "near-ambient", "vocal caterwauling", and intangibility quotes.
Images
[edit]- Album cover has NFUR. Alt text is present.
@Sammi Brie: done! Skyshiftertalk 01:51, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
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