Talk:Pasir Ris MRT station/GA1

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Reviewer: Willbb234 (talk · contribs) 18:19, 12 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Happy to give this a review for GA. Expect comments soon. Kind regards, Willbb234^Talk (please {{ping}} me in replies) 18:19, 12 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Lede

as part of the MRT eastern line extension to this station what does 'this station' refer to here?
An incident happened in 2016 on the tracks away from the station which resulted in the deaths of two maintenance workers. I suggest changing this to An incident on the tracks in 2016 resulted in the deaths of two maintenance workers. for conciseness.
an interchange with the Cross Island line (CRL) you should clarify that the CRL is upcoming and thus not currently in place.

History

was awarded to Sato Kogyo Pte Ltd 'Ltd' needs a period after it as it is an abbreviation.
on March 1986 'on' to 'in'.
The contract also includes the construction the contract was agreed in the past and thus this should read 'included'.
As announced by then-first deputy prime minister Goh Chok Tong he was the deputy prime minister, not the 'first deputy prime minister', see Deputy Prime Minister of Singapore. Also could do with a wikilink.
the station opened on 16 December when the EWL extends to Pasir Ris. this sentence doesn't quite make sense; there are some tense issues.

Sorry, but I have found quite a few grammatical issues and have only read the first four paragraphs. I believe that this article needs quite a bit of work and copyediting in order to meet the first bullet point of WP:GACR. I will therefore fail this article as it is a long way from meeting one of the GA criteria. I recommend that you request a copyedit at the Guild of Copyeditors and then re-nominate, as I'm sure that the article will pass. I hope you understand, if you have any questions please get in contact. Willbb234^Talk (please {{ping}} me in replies) 22:02, 12 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]