Talk:Partition (song)/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 21:53, 19 June 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

• The single cover images requires an alt description, so please add one
• Rest is good

Lead

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• "set list" --> "setlist"

Conception and release

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• Here it goes by just "Beyoncé", but in the infobox it states "Beyoncé Knowles", which one is it for consistency purposes?

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• Please remove the link to "arrangements"

Composition

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• "..murmuring sound expressive of pleasure.[20]" --> "...murmuring sounds expressive of pleasure.[20]"

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• Out of character review for one sec: "Thanks, Beyoncé, but if we're verbing, I think you meant 'Bill Clinton'd all on my gown." WHAT? OMG LOL

Critical reception

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• Please link "contemporary critics" to the respective article for "Music journalism"
• Great work!

Recognition

• "In July the following year, the writers of Spin magazine placed it at number four on the list of the 57 best songs so far. A writer of the publication noted something "intensely gratifying about all the raunchiness on the strip-tease, booty-dropping banger" and added that it "oozes stunty swag and immediately became a coy anthem for pop-loving women; a song to flash and strut and snap to, and not only because the beat does too".[39]" --> "In July the following year, the writers of Spin magazine placed it at number four on the list of the 57 best songs so far, with a writer of the publication noting something "intensely gratifying about all the raunchiness on the strip-tease, booty-dropping banger" and added that it "oozes stunty swag and immediately became a coy anthem for pop-loving women; a song to flash and strut and snap to, and not only because the beat does too".[39]"

Chart performance

• Nada! Nunca! Nothing!

Music videos

• "The video for "Partition" was uploaded to Beyoncé's official Vevo account on February 25, 2014[57] while the one for "Yoncé" was uploaded on November 24, 2014 to the same service to coincide with the release of Beyoncé: Platinum Edition.[58]" --> "The video for "Partition" was uploaded to Beyoncé's official Vevo account on February 25, 2014[57] while the one for "Yoncé" was uploaded on November 24, 2014 to coincide with the release of Beyoncé: Platinum Edition.[58]"

Live performances

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• "set list" --> "setlist"
• "set list" --> "setlist"

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• ""Parition" and "Yoncé" were both performed by Beyoncé at the 2014 MTV Video Music Awards on August 25 as part of a medley consisting of songs from her fifth studio album. The singer appeared wearing a bejeweled bodysuit and performed a dance choreography on a pole for the former song; "Yoncé" was performed later during her set.[108]" --> ""Parition" and "Yoncé" were both performed by Beyoncé at the 2014 MTV Video Music Awards on August 25 as part of a medley consisting of songs from her fifth studio album; Knowles appeared wearing a bejeweled bodysuit and performed a dance choreography on a pole for the former song; "Yoncé" was performed later during her set.[108]"

Cover versions

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• Please insert a comma in between "Michelle "Jersey" Maniscalco" and "along with four female dancers.[117]"

Credits and personnel

• Great! :)

Charts

• Good

Certifications

• Also good

End of GA Review:

Very few comments, an all–in–all good article! Will definitely pass after a few changes are made! On hold! Contact me with any questions, thanks! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 20:08, 22 June 2016 (UTC).

Thank you very much for the review. Everything is  Done. My love is love 22:57, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Thank ya, thank ya! Everything looks great! Love doing reviews for you! Contact me if you ever need a review, even when the GA Cup is over! :) Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 23:10, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.