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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:16, 19 September 2019 (UTC)
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- Can't remember if I noted this in my previous review(s) of similar subject, but no need to add the refs into the lead as whatever's in the lead should be covered (in more detail) in the main part of the article so that's where all the refs can live.
- "elevated Long Island Rail Road station" put (LIRR) after so when you use it later it's not surprising.
- Street Level -> Street level, and use an en-dash, not a hyphen.
- My ignorance, what's a "wye"?
- I wikilinked it Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 10:45, 23 September 2019 (UTC)
- The link to Hunters Point Ferry seems to refer to the junction as "Hunterspoint"?
- "the Forest Hills Main Line" only half in the link, is Main Line necessarily capitalised?
- I don't think that's the appropriate piped link for " post office".
- "due to a fire" would prefer to see "following a fire" I think.
- "were deemed to be structurally unsound" any consequences?
- Done I added what I found about the bridge. I haven't heard of any issues.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 14:02, 24 September 2019 (UTC)
- No spaced hyphens in ref titles.
- Done by Epicgenius.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 14:02, 24 September 2019 (UTC)
Not much else to add. So I'll put it on hold. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 12:08, 20 September 2019 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: Thanks for taking this up.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 10:45, 23 September 2019 (UTC)
- Kew Gardens 613 any word on the first and final two points? The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 12:01, 24 September 2019 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: I just dealt with them.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 14:02, 24 September 2019 (UTC)
- Kew Gardens 613 Looks good, refs 26 and 27 need to be filled out properly... The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 14:20, 24 September 2019 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: 27 was dead, and I fixed 26. Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 14:33, 24 September 2019 (UTC)
- Kew Gardens 613 Looks good, refs 26 and 27 need to be filled out properly... The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 14:20, 24 September 2019 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: I just dealt with them.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 14:02, 24 September 2019 (UTC)
- Kew Gardens 613 any word on the first and final two points? The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 12:01, 24 September 2019 (UTC)
Okeydokes, looks good to me, so I'm promoting, good work. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 14:48, 24 September 2019 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: Thanks for your review.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 15:08, 24 September 2019 (UTC)