Talk:Pará-class monitor/GA1
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Reviewer: Magic♪piano 00:42, 5 November 2010 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- The table should have some indication of sourcing (presumably from Gratz).
- Done.
- The table should have some indication of sourcing (presumably from Gratz).
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- A. Major aspects:
- How do these ships differ in design from their predecessor and successors? These relationships are claimed but not elaborated. (Methinks I asked you a similar question once before...)
- This source claims (probably wrongly) that Alagoas was captured in the Passagem. This source implies the boarding was repulsed, as does this one. Since other boardings are mentioned, this one should also.
- Gratz makes no mention of any boarding attempt during the Passagem, nor can I find reference to any such thing in more modern sources.
- I suppose it's possible to older sources may have confused it with other boarding actions... Magic♪piano 01:21, 7 November 2010 (UTC)
- B. Focused:
- B. Focused:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- I'd add one of the paintings from Passagem de Humaitá here; one in particular shows what is presumably one of these ships lashed to an ironclad.
- I'd missed this, added.
- I'd add one of the paintings from Passagem de Humaitá here; one in particular shows what is presumably one of these ships lashed to an ironclad.
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
Shouldn't be too much work to deal with... Magic♪piano 15:42, 5 November 2010 (UTC)